假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在

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    假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中

共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。  增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；               

      2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

     Last Monday we hold a monitor election during our class meeting. Two students in our class took part the event. They are Liu Dong and Wang Hong all of whom are the top students in our grade. Before the election they each gave a briefly presentation about their plan after become the monitor. At the last the winner turned out to be Wang Hong who gained 28 votes when Liu Dong gained 15. Obviously we thought Wang Hong’s plan a good one. In the end we gave Wang Hong a big hand but congratulated her. I expect that our class will be better under his leadership.

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Last Monday we hold a monitor election during our class meeting. Two students in our class took

              held

part/\ the event. They are Liu Dong and Wang Hong all of whom are the top students in our grade.

   in                                      both

 Before the election they each gave a briefly presentation about their plan after become the

                                brief                             becoming

monitor. At the last the winner turned out to be Wang Hong who gained 28 votes when Liu Dong

                                                                  while

gained 15. Obviously we thought Wang Hong’s plan a good one. In the end we gave Wang

                                            better

Hong a big hand but congratulated her. I expect that our class will be better under his leadership.

             and                                                  her