假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

   I was often laughed at my classmates before I turned 14 because I was always very nervous when talking to someone. Helpful and sad I felt that I could do nothing. You cannot imagine what great difficulty I have in my life. And later something happened what changed my life completely. It was an English speech contest and my mother encouraged me to take part in it. I tried her best to remember the whole speech“Believe in yourself”and practised them over 100 times. Believe it or not I finally won the first prize. Heard the cheers from the teachers and students I stood here with my eyes full of excited tear.

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I was often laughed at /\ my classmates before I turned 14 because I was always very

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nervous when talking to someone. Helpful and sad I felt that I could do nothing 

                                           Helpless

You cannot imagine what great difficulty I have in my life. And later something happened

  had              But

what changed my life completely. It was an English speech contest 
which

and my mother encouraged me to take part in it. I tried her best to remember the

  my

whole speech “Believe in yourself” and practised them over 100 times. Believe it or not

 it

I finally won the first prize. Heard the cheers from the teachers and students I

Hearing

stood here with my eyes full of excited tear.

 there                                   tears