假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

       2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Today we were organized for a short trip to the West Hill. We set out by the school bus at 7:30 a.m. The weather was pleasure and every one of us was excited. After two hour’s ride we arrived there at nine thirty. We began our programs the moment as we got off from the bus. We played games on the hillside and swimming in the river. After that we had our picnic lunch. In the afternoon we walked along the river that winds around the hills.  We took a lot of photo and enjoyed ourselves very much. Time past quickly and we had to come back.It was over five o’clock that we returned school. What a good trip we had today! I’ll never forget it.

Answer 1

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7:30 a.m. The weather was pleasure and every one of us was excited. After   two hour’s ride we

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arrived there at nine thirty. We began our programs the moment as we got off from the bus. We

played games on the hillside and swimming in the river. After that we had our picnic lunch. In

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the afternoon we walked along the river that winds around the hills.   We took a lot of photo and

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enjoyed ourselves very much. Time past quickly and we had to come back. It was over five

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o’clock that we returned ∧ school. What a good trip we had today! I’ll never forget it.

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