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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:(1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.
(2)只允许修改l0处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Union is strength no matter when you're facing difficulties or in a dilemma.Cooperation plays an important part in getting you out of trouble.
There was a time when I was too proud that I overlooked my classmate,refusing to work together with them.Therefore,it was no doubt that I was left alone,suffering from loneliness and failure.Unfortunately a teacher impressed on me the value of cooperation.From then on,I learned to help others and turn to my friends for the help whenever I had difficulty finish a task on my own.Surely cooperation made a great difference.Now I am getting well with my friends.
My experience has teach me that only if we attach great importance with cooperation,can we go beyond ourselves.As the saying go"United,we stand; divided,we fall."
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:(1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.
(2)只允许修改l0处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Union is strength no matter when you're facing difficulties or in a dilemma.Cooperation plays an important part in getting you out of trouble.
There was a time when I was too proud that I overlooked my classmate,refusing to work together with them.Therefore,it was no doubt that I was left alone,suffering from loneliness and failure.Unfortunately a teacher impressed on me the value of cooperation.From then on,I learned to help others and turn to my friends for the help whenever I had difficulty finish a task on my own.Surely cooperation made a great difference.Now I am getting well with my friends.
My experience has teach me that only if we attach great importance with cooperation,can we go beyond ourselves.As the saying go"United,we stand; divided,we fall."
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Union is strength no matter when you're facing difficulties or in a dilemma.Cooperation plays an important part in getting you out of trouble.
There was a time when I was too proud that I overlooked my classmate,refusing to work together with them.Therefore,it was no doubt that I was left alone,suffering from loneliness and failure.Unfortunately a teacher impressed on me the value of cooperation.From then on,I learned to help others and turn to my friends for the help whenever I had difficulty finish a task on my own.Surely cooperation made a great difference.Now I am getting∧well with my friends.
My experience has teach me that only if we attach great importance with cooperation,can we go beyond ourselves.As the saying go"United,we stand; divided,we fall."
详
1.too改为so 考查固定搭配.so…that…意为"如此/这么…以致于…",句型中的so是副词,常常用来修饰形容词或副词,常用句型为:主语+谓语+so+adj./adv.+that从句.
2.classmate改为classmates 考查名词.classmate是可数名词,此处"不止一个同学",要用复数.
3.it改为there 考查固定搭配.there is no doubt that…意为"毫无疑问…",是固定句型.
4.Unfortunately改为Fortunately 考查副词.老师让他知道合作的重要性,这是幸运的事情.
5.去掉the 考查冠词.turn to sb for help意为"向某人求助",此处是泛指,去掉the.
6.finish改为finishing 考查动名词.have difficulty in doing sth."做…有困难",是固定搭配.
7.getting后加on/along 考查固定搭配.get along well with sb.意为"与…相处得好",是固定短语,在get后加on或along.
8.teach改为taught 考查动词时态:has后面接过去分词构成现在完成时.
9.with改为to 考查固定搭配.attach importance to意为"重视",是固定搭配.
10.go改为goes 考查主谓一致.the saying是单数形式,谓语动词也应是第三人称单数形式.
There was a time when I was too proud that I overlooked my classmate,refusing to work together with them.Therefore,it was no doubt that I was left alone,suffering from loneliness and failure.Unfortunately a teacher impressed on me the value of cooperation.From then on,I learned to help others and turn to my friends for the help whenever I had difficulty finish a task on my own.Surely cooperation made a great difference.Now I am getting∧well with my friends.
My experience has teach me that only if we attach great importance with cooperation,can we go beyond ourselves.As the saying go"United,we stand; divided,we fall."
详
1.too改为so 考查固定搭配.so…that…意为"如此/这么…以致于…",句型中的so是副词,常常用来修饰形容词或副词,常用句型为:主语+谓语+so+adj./adv.+that从句.
2.classmate改为classmates 考查名词.classmate是可数名词,此处"不止一个同学",要用复数.
3.it改为there 考查固定搭配.there is no doubt that…意为"毫无疑问…",是固定句型.
4.Unfortunately改为Fortunately 考查副词.老师让他知道合作的重要性,这是幸运的事情.
5.去掉the 考查冠词.turn to sb for help意为"向某人求助",此处是泛指,去掉the.
6.finish改为finishing 考查动名词.have difficulty in doing sth."做…有困难",是固定搭配.
7.getting后加on/along 考查固定搭配.get along well with sb.意为"与…相处得好",是固定短语,在get后加on或along.
8.teach改为taught 考查动词时态:has后面接过去分词构成现在完成时.
9.with改为to 考查固定搭配.attach importance to意为"重视",是固定搭配.
10.go改为goes 考查主谓一致.the saying是单数形式,谓语动词也应是第三人称单数形式.
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