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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Being responsible is actually not that difficult.I used to think it is hard to grow up into a responsible member of the society.An incident happening in a rainy Sunday afternoon changed my attitude.I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light while a girl was knocked down by passing car,which drove off quickly.A man immediately gave her first aid and I had joined in without hesitation.Soon many help was given to the girl.Because we sent her to the nearest hospitals in time,she was able to receive properly treatment.Not badly injured,I expressed gratitude to those giving help.Compared with the escaping driver,I was proud of what I did.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Being responsible is actually not that difficult.I used to think it is hard to grow up into a responsible member of the society.An incident happening in a rainy Sunday afternoon changed my attitude.I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light while a girl was knocked down by passing car,which drove off quickly.A man immediately gave her first aid and I had joined in without hesitation.Soon many help was given to the girl.Because we sent her to the nearest hospitals in time,she was able to receive properly treatment.Not badly injured,I expressed gratitude to those giving help.Compared with the escaping driver,I was proud of what I did.
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Being responsible is actually not that difficult.I used to think it is hard to grow up into a responsible member of the society.An incident happening in a rainy Sunday afternoon changed my attitude.I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light while a girl was knocked down by∧passing car,which drove off quickly.A man immediately gave her first aid and I had joined in without hesitation.Soon many help was given to the girl.Because we sent her to the nearest hospitals in time,she was able to receive properly treatment.
Not badly injured,I expressed gratitude to those giving help.Compared with the escaping driver,I was proud of what I did.
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1.is改为was 考查时态 根据主句中的used to (过去常常)可知,本句描述的是过去的事情,故此处应使用一般过去时,故用was.
2.in改为on 考查介词 由于此处用在表示星期几的(上)下午的前面,故用介词on.
3.while改为when 考查句意理解以及从属连词 本句的意思是:我正在去书店的路上等着绿灯,这时一个女孩被一辆路过的车撞倒了;while:当…时候,与…同时;此处意为:这时,突然;故用when.
4.by之后加a 考查不定冠词 此处用来修饰单数名词car,表示泛指一辆路过的汽车;故用a.
5.her改为his 考查句意理解以及人称代词 本句的意思是:一位男士立刻进行了急救,我也毫不犹豫地加入了其中;此处用来修饰名词词组 first aid,指的是:一位男士进行的急救;故用his.
6.many改为much 考查形容词 many修饰可数名词,much修饰不可数名词;此处用来修饰不可数名词help,故用much.
7.hospitals 改为 hospital 考查名词的单复数 此处指的是:那家最近的医院,故用单数名词hospital.
8.properly改为proper 考查形容词 此处用来修饰名词treatment,故用形容词proper.
9.I改为she 考查人称代词的一致性 此处在句中作主语,指的是那个被汽车撞倒的女孩;故用she.
10.escaping改为escaped 考查过去分词 此处在句中作定语,修饰名词driver,表示已经完成的动作;故用过去分词escaped.
Not badly injured,I expressed gratitude to those giving help.Compared with the escaping driver,I was proud of what I did.
详
1.is改为was 考查时态 根据主句中的used to (过去常常)可知,本句描述的是过去的事情,故此处应使用一般过去时,故用was.
2.in改为on 考查介词 由于此处用在表示星期几的(上)下午的前面,故用介词on.
3.while改为when 考查句意理解以及从属连词 本句的意思是:我正在去书店的路上等着绿灯,这时一个女孩被一辆路过的车撞倒了;while:当…时候,与…同时;此处意为:这时,突然;故用when.
4.by之后加a 考查不定冠词 此处用来修饰单数名词car,表示泛指一辆路过的汽车;故用a.
5.her改为his 考查句意理解以及人称代词 本句的意思是:一位男士立刻进行了急救,我也毫不犹豫地加入了其中;此处用来修饰名词词组 first aid,指的是:一位男士进行的急救;故用his.
6.many改为much 考查形容词 many修饰可数名词,much修饰不可数名词;此处用来修饰不可数名词help,故用much.
7.hospitals 改为 hospital 考查名词的单复数 此处指的是:那家最近的医院,故用单数名词hospital.
8.properly改为proper 考查形容词 此处用来修饰名词treatment,故用形容词proper.
9.I改为she 考查人称代词的一致性 此处在句中作主语,指的是那个被汽车撞倒的女孩;故用she.
10.escaping改为escaped 考查过去分词 此处在句中作定语,修饰名词driver,表示已经完成的动作;故用过去分词escaped.
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