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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧,并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Dear cousin,
Long time no see!It has been almost a year ever since you move to London.I miss you a lot of.I'm writing the letter to ask you for help.As you know,I am eager to be a photographer like you,so I asked my parents to buy me the camera last week.But he told me I wouldn't concentrate in my schoolwork if I got it.Oh,my God!What can I make them trust me?I'm not a kid any longer,but I can control myself.What's worse,I have promised that I will take photos for the school's newspaper next month.When asking by my classmates,I will be absolutely embarrassed.Therefore,would you like to lend me some money?If you'd like to,I will return it as soon as possibly.
Yours Sincerely,
Tom
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧,并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Dear cousin,
Long time no see!It has been almost a year ever since you move to London.I miss you a lot of.I'm writing the letter to ask you for help.As you know,I am eager to be a photographer like you,so I asked my parents to buy me the camera last week.But he told me I wouldn't concentrate in my schoolwork if I got it.Oh,my God!What can I make them trust me?I'm not a kid any longer,but I can control myself.What's worse,I have promised that I will take photos for the school's newspaper next month.When asking by my classmates,I will be absolutely embarrassed.Therefore,would you like to lend me some money?If you'd like to,I will return it as soon as possibly.
Yours Sincerely,
Tom
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Dear cousin,
Long time no see!It has been almost a year ever since you move to London.I miss you a lot of.I'm writing the letter to ask you for help.As you know,I am eager to be a photographer like you,so I asked my parents to buy me the camera last week.But he told me I wouldn't concentrate in my schoolwork if I got it.Oh,my God!What can I make them trust me?I'm not a kid any longer,but I can control myself.What's worse,I have promised that I will take photos for the school's newspaper next month.When asking by my classmates,I will be absolutely embarrassed.Therefore,would you like to lend me some money?If you'd like to,I will return it as soon as possibly.
Yours Sincerely,
Tom详
1.move改成moved;考查动词的时态,结合上下文分析move这个动作发生在过去,故用一般过去时.
2.去掉of;考查介词,of是介词,后面要跟名词作宾语,此处a lot表示程度,修饰miss.
3.the改成a;考查冠词,这里camera在文中第一次提到,用不定冠词a泛指"一个".
4.he改成they;考查人称代词,此处的人称代词指代前面提到的my parents,故用复数形式they.
5.in改成on;考查介词,concentrate on是固定搭配,意为"专心,全神贯注于".
6.it 改成 one;考查代词,分析句意为"如果我有一个的话…",故用one表示"一个".
7.What 改成How;考查疑问词,分析句意为"我怎样才能使他们相信我",故用how表示方式.
8.but改成and;考查连词,分析句意"我不再是小孩子了,我能控制自己",可知此处为并列关系而非转折,故用and.
9.asking改成asked;考查非谓语动词,主语I与动词ask是被动关系,故用过去分词形式,完整形式为when I am asked by my classmates…
10.possibly改为possible;考查形容词,as soon as possibe是固定搭配,意为"尽可能快".
Long time no see!It has been almost a year ever since you move to London.I miss you a lot of.I'm writing the letter to ask you for help.As you know,I am eager to be a photographer like you,so I asked my parents to buy me the camera last week.But he told me I wouldn't concentrate in my schoolwork if I got it.Oh,my God!What can I make them trust me?I'm not a kid any longer,but I can control myself.What's worse,I have promised that I will take photos for the school's newspaper next month.When asking by my classmates,I will be absolutely embarrassed.Therefore,would you like to lend me some money?If you'd like to,I will return it as soon as possibly.
Yours Sincerely,
Tom详
1.move改成moved;考查动词的时态,结合上下文分析move这个动作发生在过去,故用一般过去时.
2.去掉of;考查介词,of是介词,后面要跟名词作宾语,此处a lot表示程度,修饰miss.
3.the改成a;考查冠词,这里camera在文中第一次提到,用不定冠词a泛指"一个".
4.he改成they;考查人称代词,此处的人称代词指代前面提到的my parents,故用复数形式they.
5.in改成on;考查介词,concentrate on是固定搭配,意为"专心,全神贯注于".
6.it 改成 one;考查代词,分析句意为"如果我有一个的话…",故用one表示"一个".
7.What 改成How;考查疑问词,分析句意为"我怎样才能使他们相信我",故用how表示方式.
8.but改成and;考查连词,分析句意"我不再是小孩子了,我能控制自己",可知此处为并列关系而非转折,故用and.
9.asking改成asked;考查非谓语动词,主语I与动词ask是被动关系,故用过去分词形式,完整形式为when I am asked by my classmates…
10.possibly改为possible;考查形容词,as soon as possibe是固定搭配,意为"尽可能快".
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