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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Nowadays it's common for many high school student to skip (跳过) breakfast,leading to both poor school performance or damage to their health.
When asked why they skip the breakfast,some students say he think of breakfast as the least important meal of the day,and think it unnecessary,while others said they have too few time in the morning to have breakfast.And a third group,mostly girls who figures are their biggest concern,say they want lose weight to keep slim.
I strongly suggest that every student has breakfast properly every day,since breakfast can provide the necessary energy one needs.In addition,having breakfast can help you concentrate in class and study efficient.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Nowadays it's common for many high school student to skip (跳过) breakfast,leading to both poor school performance or damage to their health.
When asked why they skip the breakfast,some students say he think of breakfast as the least important meal of the day,and think it unnecessary,while others said they have too few time in the morning to have breakfast.And a third group,mostly girls who figures are their biggest concern,say they want lose weight to keep slim.
I strongly suggest that every student has breakfast properly every day,since breakfast can provide the necessary energy one needs.In addition,having breakfast can help you concentrate in class and study efficient.
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Nowadays it's common for many high school student to skip (跳过)
breakfast,leading to both poor school performance or damage to
their health.
When asked why they skip the breakfast,some students say he think of
breakfast as the least important meal of the day,and think it unnecessary,
while others said they have too few time in the morning to have breakfast.
And a third group,mostly girls who figures are their biggest concern,
say they want∧lose weight to keep slim.
I strongly suggest that every student has breakfast properly every day,since
breakfast can provide the necessary energy one needs.In addition,having
breakfast can help you concentrate in class and study efficient.
详
1.student改为students 考查名词的单复数 由于many修饰可数名词的复数,故用students.
2.or改为and 考查固定搭配 both…and…意为"两者都,既…又…",此处指的是:这既导致了他们学业不佳,又损害了他们的身体健康,故用and.
3.去掉 breakfast之前的the 考查零冠词 由于三餐前一般不加冠词,故应去掉the.
4.he改为they 考查人称代词的一致性 此处在that从句中作主语,指代的是前面的some students;故用they.
5.said改为say 考查时态 根据上下文都使用了一般现在时可知,本段介绍的是目前学生们不吃早餐的原因,所以此处也应使用一般现在时;故用say.
6.few改为little 考查形容词few和little的用法区别 few修饰可数名词的复数,little修饰不可数名词;由于time是不可数名词,故用little.
7.who改为whose 考查关系代词 本句为定语从句;由于先行词 girls 在该从句中作figures的定语,意为"girls'figures女孩们的形象",故用whose.
8.want之后加to 考查固定短语 want to do意为"想要做某事",此处指的是:他们想减肥以保持苗条,故在want之后加to.
9.has改为have 考查虚拟语气 本句的意思是:我强烈建议每一位学生们每天都应适当地吃些早餐;由于suggest意为"建议 时,它后面的宾语从句应使用虚拟语气,即谓语部分用"should+动词原形"其中should可以省略.故用have.
10.efficient改为efficiently 考查副词 由于此处用来修饰动词study,故用副词efficiently.
breakfast,leading to both poor school performance or damage to
their health.
When asked why they skip the breakfast,some students say he think of
breakfast as the least important meal of the day,and think it unnecessary,
while others said they have too few time in the morning to have breakfast.
And a third group,mostly girls who figures are their biggest concern,
say they want∧lose weight to keep slim.
I strongly suggest that every student has breakfast properly every day,since
breakfast can provide the necessary energy one needs.In addition,having
breakfast can help you concentrate in class and study efficient.
详
1.student改为students 考查名词的单复数 由于many修饰可数名词的复数,故用students.
2.or改为and 考查固定搭配 both…and…意为"两者都,既…又…",此处指的是:这既导致了他们学业不佳,又损害了他们的身体健康,故用and.
3.去掉 breakfast之前的the 考查零冠词 由于三餐前一般不加冠词,故应去掉the.
4.he改为they 考查人称代词的一致性 此处在that从句中作主语,指代的是前面的some students;故用they.
5.said改为say 考查时态 根据上下文都使用了一般现在时可知,本段介绍的是目前学生们不吃早餐的原因,所以此处也应使用一般现在时;故用say.
6.few改为little 考查形容词few和little的用法区别 few修饰可数名词的复数,little修饰不可数名词;由于time是不可数名词,故用little.
7.who改为whose 考查关系代词 本句为定语从句;由于先行词 girls 在该从句中作figures的定语,意为"girls'figures女孩们的形象",故用whose.
8.want之后加to 考查固定短语 want to do意为"想要做某事",此处指的是:他们想减肥以保持苗条,故在want之后加to.
9.has改为have 考查虚拟语气 本句的意思是:我强烈建议每一位学生们每天都应适当地吃些早餐;由于suggest意为"建议 时,它后面的宾语从句应使用虚拟语气,即谓语部分用"should+动词原形"其中should可以省略.故用have.
10.efficient改为efficiently 考查副词 由于此处用来修饰动词study,故用副词efficiently.
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