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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同学写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同学写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.Like everyone knows,it's famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.The weather was fine.It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain.The three of them were very excited.As we climbed the mountain,we fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories.On the way down I was busy taking pictures since the scenery was so beautiful.The time passes quickly.Evening came.We spent the night in a hotel in the top of the mountain.The food was expensive and the service was good.I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.Like everyone knows,it's famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.The weather was fine.It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain.The three of them were very excited.As we climbed the mountain,we fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories.On the way down I was busy taking pictures since the scenery was so beautiful.The time passes quickly.Evening came.We spent the night in a hotel in the top of the mountain.The food was expensive and the service was good.I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.
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Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.Likeeveryone
As
knows,it's∧famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.The weather was fine.It
a
was about noon∧we arrived at the foot of the mountain.The three of them were very excited.
when us
As we climbed the mountain,we fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories.On the way
visited
down I was busy taking pictures since the scenery was so beautiful.The time passesquickly.
up passed
Evening came.We spent the night in a hotel inthe top of the mountain.The food was expensive
at
and the service was good.I was so tired that I fell asleepat the moment my head touched the pillow.
but 去掉at
1.Like改为As;考查固定搭配,as every knows是固定短语,意为"众所周知",like是介词,后面接名词或名词性短语,故此处Like改为As.
2.famous前面加a;考查冠词,mountain是可数名词,前面加不定冠词a泛指"一个".
3.noon后面加when;考查时间副词,这里句子It was about noon和we arrived at the foot of the mountain分别是一个完整独立的句子,中间缺少一个连接词,noon指时间,故用when引导从句.
4.them改为us;考查人称代词,文中提到我和父母,强调"我们三人",而非"他们",故them改为us.
5.visiting改为visited;考查并列结构,句中动词visit 和fed,told是并列谓语,所以时态要保持一致用一般过去时.
6.down改为up;考查句意,结合上下文分析,句意应为"因为风景很美,在上山的路上我忙着拍照",所以
down改为up.
7.passes改为passed;考查动词的时态,本文讲的是上周的事情,故用一般过去时.
8.in改为at;考查介词,"在山顶"用"at the top of the mountain",这是固定用法.
9.and改为but;考查连词,结合语境分析,句意应为"食物很贵但服务很好",所以用but表示转折.
10.去掉at;考查固定句型,the moment后面跟句子,意为"一…就…",所以把介词at去掉.
As
knows,it's∧famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.The weather was fine.It
a
was about noon∧we arrived at the foot of the mountain.The three of them were very excited.
when us
As we climbed the mountain,we fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories.On the way
visited
down I was busy taking pictures since the scenery was so beautiful.The time passesquickly.
up passed
Evening came.We spent the night in a hotel inthe top of the mountain.The food was expensive
at
and the service was good.I was so tired that I fell asleepat the moment my head touched the pillow.
but 去掉at
1.Like改为As;考查固定搭配,as every knows是固定短语,意为"众所周知",like是介词,后面接名词或名词性短语,故此处Like改为As.
2.famous前面加a;考查冠词,mountain是可数名词,前面加不定冠词a泛指"一个".
3.noon后面加when;考查时间副词,这里句子It was about noon和we arrived at the foot of the mountain分别是一个完整独立的句子,中间缺少一个连接词,noon指时间,故用when引导从句.
4.them改为us;考查人称代词,文中提到我和父母,强调"我们三人",而非"他们",故them改为us.
5.visiting改为visited;考查并列结构,句中动词visit 和fed,told是并列谓语,所以时态要保持一致用一般过去时.
6.down改为up;考查句意,结合上下文分析,句意应为"因为风景很美,在上山的路上我忙着拍照",所以
down改为up.
7.passes改为passed;考查动词的时态,本文讲的是上周的事情,故用一般过去时.
8.in改为at;考查介词,"在山顶"用"at the top of the mountain",这是固定用法.
9.and改为but;考查连词,结合语境分析,句意应为"食物很贵但服务很好",所以用but表示转折.
10.去掉at;考查固定句型,the moment后面跟句子,意为"一…就…",所以把介词at去掉.
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