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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Dick is an Australian man,aged at 25,whose life is full of hardships.He was born without arms and legs.He used to be made fun by others.Everything seemed impossible to them.However,Dick never gave up.After many failure,he finally learned to swim,fish and even surf.That surprised us most is that he completed university education and get two degrees.And now he is the CEO of two companies.When asking about the secret of his success,he thinks a positive attitude is a key to success.Dick's story greatly inspired me.Compared with him,we are health.However,we are always frustrated when we face difficulties.I think Dick have set a good example to us.We should learn from him and never give up.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Dick is an Australian man,aged at 25,whose life is full of hardships.He was born without arms and legs.He used to be made fun by others.Everything seemed impossible to them.However,Dick never gave up.After many failure,he finally learned to swim,fish and even surf.That surprised us most is that he completed university education and get two degrees.And now he is the CEO of two companies.When asking about the secret of his success,he thinks a positive attitude is a key to success.Dick's story greatly inspired me.Compared with him,we are health.However,we are always frustrated when we face difficulties.I think Dick have set a good example to us.We should learn from him and never give up.
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Dick is an Australian man,aged at 25,whose life is full of hardships.He was born without arms and legs.He used to be made fun∧by others.Everything seemed impossible to them.However,Dick never gave up.After many failure,he finally learned to swim,fish and even surf.That surprised us most is that he completed university education and get two degrees.And now he is the CEO of two companies.When asking about the secret of his success,he thinks a positive attitude is a key to success.Dick's story greatly inspired me.Compared with him,we are health.However,we are always frustrated when we face difficulties.I think Dick have set a good example to us.We should learn from him and never give up
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1.去掉 at;考查介词,aged+数字表示"…岁",是过去分词短语作定语,这是一个固定用法,aged和数字之间不加任何介词.
2.fun后加 of;考查介词,make fun of是固定短语,意为"取笑,嘲笑".
3.them 改为him;考查人称代词,分析句意为"每件事情对他来说看起来都不可能",此处人称代词指代 Dick,所以用但是形式him.
4.failure 改为failures;考查名词,failure意为"失败",是可数名词,前面有many修饰,故用复数形式.
5.That 改为What; 考查主语从句,此处what在主语从句中作从句的主语.
6.get 改为got;考查动词的时态,句中and连接并列谓语complete和get,因为动作发生在过去,所以用一般过去时,故此处用got.
7.asking 改为asked;考查分词作状语,分析句子结构可知,此处是用分词形式作时间状语,因为主语he与动词ask逻辑上存在被动关系,故用过去分词形式作状语.
8.a key 改为the key;考查冠词,此处用定冠词the表示特指.
9.health 改为healthy;考查形容词,此处用形容词形式healthy作系动词are的表语.
10.Have 改为has;考查动词的时态,本文陈述一个事实情况,故用一般现在时,主语为Dick,所以用第三人称单数形式has.
详
1.去掉 at;考查介词,aged+数字表示"…岁",是过去分词短语作定语,这是一个固定用法,aged和数字之间不加任何介词.
2.fun后加 of;考查介词,make fun of是固定短语,意为"取笑,嘲笑".
3.them 改为him;考查人称代词,分析句意为"每件事情对他来说看起来都不可能",此处人称代词指代 Dick,所以用但是形式him.
4.failure 改为failures;考查名词,failure意为"失败",是可数名词,前面有many修饰,故用复数形式.
5.That 改为What; 考查主语从句,此处what在主语从句中作从句的主语.
6.get 改为got;考查动词的时态,句中and连接并列谓语complete和get,因为动作发生在过去,所以用一般过去时,故此处用got.
7.asking 改为asked;考查分词作状语,分析句子结构可知,此处是用分词形式作时间状语,因为主语he与动词ask逻辑上存在被动关系,故用过去分词形式作状语.
8.a key 改为the key;考查冠词,此处用定冠词the表示特指.
9.health 改为healthy;考查形容词,此处用形容词形式healthy作系动词are的表语.
10.Have 改为has;考查动词的时态,本文陈述一个事实情况,故用一般现在时,主语为Dick,所以用第三人称单数形式has.
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