请帮忙分析这句英文有没有错误?说说原因请帮忙分析这句英文有没有错误?错在哪说说原因对英国人来说,值得庆幸的是英国银行有一个残钞鉴别组,负责那些把钱塞进机器或塞给狗的人提出

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请帮忙分析这句英文有没有错误?说说原因
请帮忙分析这句英文有没有错误?错在哪 说说原因

对英国人来说,值得庆幸的是英国银行有一个残钞鉴别组,负责那些把钱塞进机器或塞给狗的人提出的索赔要求.看起来,狗很喜欢咀嚼钱币.
It is lucky to british, there is a team that identification lack bank note in every british bank, they deal with compensation request for these people who made the paper in washing machine or gave their dogs. It seem that dogs like chewing bank note

Answer 1

1.there is a team that identification lack bank note in every british bank.
这是个定语从句,在从句中that是主语,主语后应该跟动词,所以应该把identification改为identificates.
2.把request后面的for改为against,意思是对这些人索赔,而for的意思是为.
3.give是不及物动词,其后需跟to+宾语.