请帮忙看一下我写的这段英语有没有语法错误.\x05TellmeaboutyourcityWellasyoucanprobablyguessIcomefromHarbinandIlivedhereallmylife.Infact,Ineverleavemyhometownexcepttravel.IsupposeifIhadtodescribeHarb

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请帮忙看一下我写的这段英语有没有语法错误.
\x05Tell me about your city
Well as you can probably guess I come from Harbin and I lived here all my life.In fact,I never leave my hometown except travel.I suppose if I had to describe Harbin,the first thing I would say is that the weather of winter is absolutely cold and the summer always cool but too short.Maybe even it has the lowest average temperature among all of the Chinese provincial capitals I guess.It’s so cold that the Songhua River which goes through our city will freeze about five months.But another point I could add is that thanks to the winter,it makes my hometown famous for ice and snow.The government builds ice engraving and snow sculpture to establish a large-scale amusement park in order to attract tourists.And I shouldn’t forget to mention that one of my hometown’s significant characteristic is that Russian and Japanese architectures and cobblestone streets.Actually,it is hardly to see at other cities.

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第一行：lived可以考虑改成have been living
第二行：had to describe可以改成have to describe
第三行：可以考虑把the weather of 去掉,直接改成 the winter is absolutely cold and the summer is always cool but too short here.
第四行：可以考虑不要I guess,因为句头已经有maybe了
倒数第二行的that Russian的that后面应该接一个完整的句子,不然也可以直接用the Russian and Japanese..
最后一行：in other cities
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