如果有一天你能感受到我有多爱你,你就能明白为什么我们只能做陌生人!Ifthereisoneday,YoucanfeelHowdeepIloveyou,YouwillknowWhywecanonlybestrangers.翻译成这样如何帮我再润色下Ifthereisoneda

Question

如果有一天你能感受到我有多爱你,你就能明白为什么我们只能做陌生人!
If there is one day,
You can feel
How deep I love you,
You will know
Why we can only be strangers.
翻译成这样如何 帮我再润色下
If there is one day,
最好以这个开头
这是我重新翻译的
帮我检查一下翻译的语法有没有问题
可以的话再帮我润色 感激不尽
If there is one day,
You can realize
How much I love you,
You will know
Why should we only be strangers.

Answer 1

润色：
If you can feel how deep I love you someday,you'll understand why we can only be strangers.