要流畅的没语病的本人感觉用when开头不对.追加大大的.....我好歹也能看明白点英语的

Question

要流畅的
没语病的
本人感觉用when 开头不对.
追加大大的.
....
我好歹也能看明白点英语的

Answer 1

问句似乎加强了语气.情诗需意译
当从人群中寻找你的身影成为一种习惯,
当在不知觉中想起你的笑容已成为自然,
当再不对你说出口我将会注定终身遗憾,
我选择对你说出
好想认识你,
好想有你一生相伴,
否则
我的心将无所相依
天涯浪迹.
Why I get used to looking for your stature out of the crowd?
Why your smile always appears in my mind unconsciously?
I had a sudden enlightenment of the possible repentance if I don't woo you.
Now I determine to pour my frankness out,
Please acquaint me!
Please accompany me!
Otherwise,
My heart loses the unique harbor,
and becomes homeless all the rest of my life!