我需要把下面的内容译成英语,请邦忙,先说一下语言环境,我在外包平台上找了个老外写几篇英文文章,他完成的文章并不好,有缺点,我让他修改,下面是我要译的内容,意译即可1.在产品对比文章

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我需要把下面的内容译成英语,请邦忙,
先说一下语言环境,我在外包平台上找了个老外写几篇英文文章,他完成的文章并不好,有缺点,我让他修改,下面是我要译的内容,意译即可
1.在产品对比文章中,我希望你对比产品的功能,重点突出每种产品的某一个或几个重要功能,及它们带来的好处,而不仅仅是列出那些功能.
2.这个产品是比较新的产品,你的文章应重点讲解它有那些新的功能,指出新产品相对于旧产品增加了那些新的功能,及新功能给人们带来的好处.当然新的产品也可能有缺陷,如果有,再做一下新产品和旧产品缺陷的对比.
3.你的文章有太多的错误,而且有一篇文章：xxx,存在着凑字数的现象/文字填充/滥竽充数,你需要重写这篇文章.
新的写作要求
1关于文章结构/模板/格式,许多作者想要一个好的文章结构,然后按照它写新的文章,我认为优秀的文章是没有固定结构的,如果你写的文章都是同一种结构形式,那么读者可能浏览完一、二篇文章后就没有兴趣看其余的文章了,因为在他们看来,所有的文章都是一样的.所以一个网站上优秀的文章是千变万化的.我希望你灵活些.
好消息是,我在这里提供了样本文章,你点击网址看一下它们,它们的每篇文章的结构都不一样.事实上,这个网站上的每篇文章都很优秀,每篇文章都有自己的结构形式.它们唯一的共同之处在于,为读者提供了价值.
在写作之前,请考虑你的文章采用什么结构?
2文章的重点,每篇文章都应有重点,在写作之前请考虑你的文章重点是什么,文章重点与文章结构相切相关.
3不要外包你的写作任务.
4你写的文章将发表在XXX博客上.
请不要机译!

Answer 1

Let me talk about the language environment, I found a foreigner inoutsourcing platform to write a few articles English article, he finished thearticle is not good, there are shortcomings, I make him change, here is myto translate the content, free translation can be
1 in the comparison of products in the article, I hope you compare the function of the product, highlight one or several important function for each product, and the benefits they bring, not just to list those functions.
2 this product is a new product, your article should focus on it has the functions of those new, points out that the new products compared to the old product to increase the function of those new, and the new function to bring the benefits of. Of course, new products may also have defects, if any, to compare and contrast the new product and old product defects.
3 your article is too many mistakes, and an article: XXX, there exists aphenomenon of Minato words / fill / pretend to play the Yu text, you need torewrite this article.
New requirements for writing
1 about the structure / templates / format, many authors want a good articlestructure, and then in accordance with its write new articles, I believe that good writing is no fixed structure, if you write articles are the same kind ofstructure form, so the reader may read after one or two articles have no interest in watching the rest of the article, because in their view, all of the articles are the same. So a website excellent article is the myriads of changes. I hope you more flexible.
The good news is, I have provided a sample article here, you click the URLto look at their structure of each article, they are not the same. In fact, each of the articles on the site are very good, each article has its own form ofstructure. Their common thing, provide a value for the reader.
Before writing, please consider your article with what structure?
Focus of the 2 articles, each article should be focused, in writing beforeplease consider what is the focus of your article, the key point of this articleand the related structure of tangent.
3 don't outsource your writing tasks.
4 your article will be published on the XXX blog.