我是自学的,我一定要学会英语啊.有人可以做下老师帮我改下作业吗?我没有分给高手门了~上个星期天,我和同事去台城逛了一下.我们先是坐车去批发市场买衣服.那里比我们镇上的市场大很多

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我是自学的,我一定要学会英语啊.有人可以做下老师帮我改下作业吗?我没有分给高手门了~
上个星期天,我和同事去台城逛了一下.我们先是坐车去批发市场买衣服.那里比我们镇上的市场大很多.我在那里买了两件衬衫和一条运动裤.然后我们就走了.在我们回去的路上有一间自助餐厅,我们好想进去吃啊.但太贵了,要168元一位,最后还是没有进去.我们走了半个小时的路程才回到台城.回到那里第一时间是找吃的.我们到了一间快餐店,吃了一个5块的快餐.它需然便宜,但味道还不错.
last sunday. my fellow and i were going to hang around in TaiChen.at first we gone to wholesale market by bus. there is larger than our town market.i bought two T-shirts and a sports trousers in there. then we were just leave,there is a cafeteria on the way of come back.we were much want enter to it and have somethings.but that is too expensive for us,each 168yuans.bet in the end we didn't enter to it.we spent half an hour come back to TaiChenon on foot.at there then we found something to eat .we gone to noshery and snack for five yuans.it was been cheap but it's very delicious.

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at first we gone to
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此处应该为went to.如果不能理解百度hi我.
in there
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此处就要there,不要in.
then we were just leave
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then we just left
on the way of come back.
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on the way of coming back.
on the way back 还要简洁、常用一点
we were much want enter to it and have somethings
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we wanted to enter and eat something
enter to it.
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就要entered
we spent half an hour come back
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we spent half an hour in coming back
at there
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错了,还多余
we gone to noshery and snack for five yuans
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we went to a noshery and had a snack of five yuans.
it was been cheap
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although it's cheap
有不能理解的百度hi我.