初中英语作文(影评)是2008年夏天出品的一部电影.Paul是一只又胖又懒的熊猫,但paul想成为一名武林高手(greatwarrior),师傅叫他怎么打斗,让他去拯救世界.最后,他打败了坏人TaiLung.我认为.作文:Kun

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初中英语作文
(影评)是2008年夏天出品的一部电影.Paul是一只又胖又懒的熊猫,但paul想成为一名武林高手(great warrior),师傅叫他怎么打斗,让他去拯救世界.最后,他打败了坏人Tai Lung.我认为.
作文:Kung Fu Panda is a film which was produced in the summer of 2008.Paul is a fat and lazy panda.Though he is fat,he is very cute with round black eyes and a big white body.He is very interested in Kung fu.And he wants to become a great warrior.His master teaches him how to fight.And told him to save the world.Paul is very hard-working and determined.He always practices Kung fu when others are in their free time.In the end,Paul beats the bad man (是否要加"called") Tai Lung .In my opinions,if you put heart into study,then nothing is impossible.So I very like this hard-woking panda.The film is worth seeing.

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when others are in their free time.改成when others are free
加called or 逗号
put heart 改成 put your heart
hard-woking 改成 hard-working
基本是这些了