我这句话翻译的对不对？又该怎么改？赐教！原文：“就像蝴蝶飞不过沧海，没有人忍心责怪；惶恐大我这句话翻译的对不对？又该怎么改？赐教！原文：“就像蝴蝶飞不过沧海，没有人

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我这句话翻译的对不对？又该怎么改？赐教！ 原文：“就像蝴蝶飞不过沧海，没有人忍心责怪；惶恐大
我这句话翻译的对不对？又该怎么改？赐教！
原文：“就像蝴蝶飞不过沧海，没有人忍心责怪；惶恐大雨洗刷一个城市，你不在我身边。”
译文：As the butterfly couldn't fly off the ocean,no one could bleam it.

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As the butterfly couldn't fly across the ocean, no one can blame; fearing a terrible rain would sweep the city, whilst you are not close by me.