学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报．假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报

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学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报．假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点．邮件须包括以下内容：
1．你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；
2．你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由．

Answer 1

Dear Editor，
I've learned that our English Post is being reformed and one of the three columns is to be replaced by a new one．I'm writing this e-mail to share with you my opinions．Needless to say，the columns will definitely be designed according to students'interest and have positive effects on their study and life．（写信的目的）
Compared to the entertainment，I hold the view that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is more important．【高分句型一】The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing goodbye to life．【高分句型二】Consequently，more knowledge of how to keep fit can improve the quality of life．In addition，the progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening one's horizons，which in turn is beneficial to one's study and the establishment of philosophy of life．【高分句型三】（建议去除的栏目及去除的理由）
Furthermore，the career planning should be taken into account in the school English Post．On the one hand，it covers one's career development a great deal．On the other hand，it makes a great difference to one's career success in the future．（建议增加的栏目及去除的理由）
What has been mentioned above is my personal ideas．Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved version of our school English Post．【高分句型四】（希望）
Yours sincerely，
Cheng Fei