英语翻译12年寒窗就要结束了.然而\,我现在拥有的知识,只不过是浩瀚无边的知识海洋里的一勺水,远远未能满足当今迅猛发展的社会需要,我渴望通过努力实现孩童时的夙愿,踏入这所有着优良

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英语翻译
12年寒窗就要结束了.然而\,我现在拥有的知识,只不过是浩瀚无边的知识海洋里的一勺水,远远未能满足当今迅猛发展的社会需要,我渴望通过努力实现孩童时的夙愿,踏入这所有着优良传统的高等学府---.深造.

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These 12 years of hard study are about to come to an end.At this moment,however,what I have learned is just a tiny drop of water,compared from the great endless ocean of knowledge.In order to cover the need of this fast-developing word,I want to try my best to pursue my further education in your famous university of an excellent tradition to strengthen myself,which,at the same time,is also the wildest dream of mine since I was a little child.
因为考虑到中英文习惯上的差异没有完全按照你的原文逐字翻译,基本大意还是符合的很好的.我想你这是要写一份申请材料的自我陈述吧,这样的话如果是申请美国需要充分表达文采,多加些自己的独特感受,然后反复修改,把最好的一面呈现出来.