今年专四作文大家帮我看一下有没有偏题Mostofus,asstudents,arecarefulwithourmoneyindailylife:wecollectallkindsofcoupons(优惠券);welookforgroup-buydealsifweeatoutortravel;wedon'tbuyclothesunlessinasa

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今年专四作文大家帮我看一下有没有偏题
Most of us,as students,are careful with our money in daily life:we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale.However,some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers.What is your opinion?
Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words.
　　You are to write in three parts.
　　In the first part,state specifically what your view is.
　　In the second part,provide one or two reasons or your experience(s) to support your opinion.
　　In the last part,bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
　　You should supply an appropriate tittle for your composition.
　　Marks will be awarded for content,organization,grammar and appropriateness.Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.
第一段我写了这些促销能节约钱但是我也同意会使我们变得NOT SMART.我写了使用这些打折优惠是个很好的存钱方法,之后还结合经历写了有时候要擦亮我们的双眼去看待,因为有时候这些也许是陷阱,要变得是个聪明的消费者.同学说只能写一个角度,我两个都涉及了,如果偏题扣几分啊?只是OPINION的话应该双边都能写吧?

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偏向一个观点也行.自己两个也可以,但要有自己观点