谁能帮我看看有语法错误吗,英语~Myfavoritebookisheroesinhistory.firstofall,therehavemanydifferentheroesandsheroes,theyaremyspiritidolwhenIwasalittlegirl.Intheotherside,Theyletmeknow:Romewasnotbuiltinad

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谁能帮我看看有语法错误吗,英语~
My favorite book is heroes in history.
first of all,there have many different heroes and sheroes,they are my spirit idol when I was a little girl.
In the other side,They let me know :Rome was not built in a day.so,if we want successful we need continuous efforts.
Finally,from the book,we can learn that we need teamwork to share happiness and sorrow.Teamwork helps us understand who we are,why we need each other and what we can do for each other.
谢谢最好能说明原因~

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there have many different heroes and sheroes
上面的have 错了,是are
in the other side
不是只有两个,不用the other,就用Secondly好了
if we want successful we need continuous efforts
上面得,if we want to be successful,we should make continuous efforts
we can learn that we need teamwork to share happiness and sorrow.
上面的,I learn that