翻译一个句子（有悬赏）Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaways.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.Hewastall,

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翻译一个句子（有悬赏）
I hardly remember my grandmother. she used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she passes aways.She is just a distant memory for me now.
I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do home work with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
有什么错的麻烦帮个忙改一下,并说下为什么（又追加）

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singing old songs(你前面用holding后面就忘啦~)
passed away(怎么能用现在时呢O(∩_∩)O)
He had a deep voice,which set himself apart from others in our small town,and he was strong and powerful.(你一句话里两个谓语哦)
In fact（In a fact是什么?）
My classmates were scared due to his appearance（原句似乎有一点他故意去吓你的同学的感觉,但是你的意思应该是他吓到了同学）