大家来找我英语作业的茬以Mayday写一篇英语小短文要不少于50个单词,条理清楚语句通顺我的文章,写得不好是流水帐,请见谅MaydayToday.Igetupatseveno'clock.Thenihavebreakfastathalfpastseven.Ipla

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大家来找我英语作业的茬
以May day 写一篇英语小短文要不少于50个单词,条理清楚语句通顺
我的文章,写得不好是流水帐,请见谅
May day
Today.I get up at seven o'clock .Then i have breakfast at half past seven .I play football at 8 o'clock .Then i go to book shop.I have dinner at twelve o'clock .Afternoon.I go home to play computre game .I have dinner at six o'clock.Then i watch TV.I go to bed at ten o'clock .It's a happy day.
有什么错误地方,标点大小写不通顺拼错都指出来谢谢了,最好帮助改正并说明理由

Answer 1

（1）today单独做一句话不是很好.句号改成逗号.后面的afternoon也是一样.
（2）I做人称代词的时候都用大写；
（3）book shop前应该有个冠词a；
（4）没有单独用afternoon的,你可以用in the afternoon.
（5）午饭是supper,晚饭是dinner.
（6）时态可能过去时好些,毕竟写日记在后,但现在时不是很大问题.