明天要交的英语作业,求改错,求改病句.谢,为了防止有人恶意刷钱,好的话再给10金币.colourfulcrayonsIfyouhavesomeshortcrayons,youcouldmakeacolourfulcandle.Itisverybeautifulanduseful.Makethiscolourfulcandl

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明天要交的英语作业,求改错,求改病句.谢,为了防止有人恶意刷钱,好的话再给10金币.
colourful crayons
If you have some short crayons,you could make a colourful candle. It is very beautiful and useful.
Make this colourful candle, you should have a crayon, some wax and a piece of thread.
First,you should cut lots of clastic crayon. Then put them into the wax.
Second, you should pinch the wax with clastic crayon very hard. If the wax to be very beautiful, you could stop.
Third, the wax you should put them in a small lid. Then put the thread around the wax. the colourful candle is finished!

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colourful crayons
If you have some short crayons,you【 could——can】 make a colourful candle.It is very beautiful and useful.
【Make——Making】 this colourful candle,you should have a crayon,some wax and a piece of thread.
【First——最好改为Firstly,表示层次顺序】,you should cut lots of clastic crayon.Then put 【them——it】into the wax.
【Second——Secondly】,you should pinch the wax with clastic crayon very hard.If the wax 【加looks/seems】to be very beautiful,you 【could——can】 stop.
【Third——Thirdly】,【you should put the wax in a small lid.】 Then put the thread around the wax.the colourful candle is finished!