给英国学生的信英国的学生来到我们学校.周日他们离开.我写了一封邮件给他们.恳请各位英语高手们帮我看看有木有语法错误,Howareyou?DoyouremembermeIamJerry.IstudyatxxxSchool.WemetonApril11th

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给英国学生的信
英国的学生来到我们学校.周日他们离开.我写了一封邮件给他们.恳请各位英语高手们帮我看看有木有语法错误,
How are you?Do you remember me
I am Jerry.I study at xxx School.We met on April 11th,2014.
I live in Nanjing.I often get up at six o'clock.Then i have breakfast.I go to school at ten to seven.I go to school by bike.We have four lessons on the morning and three lessons in the afternoon.We often go home at five o'clock.Usually we have a great number of homework.
On Saturday morning,i do my homework at home.In the afternoon,i have three lessons.I like Sundays best.Because i can play basketball in the afternoon.
Please write to me soon.

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你写这些给他做什么,写些你想念他,最近课业怎么样啊,不知道他什么时候能再来中国玩就好了.你把自己的一天时间表写给他.我觉得有点不知所措.如果你真的想锻炼英语,可以讨论下现在国际的新闻或者中国的一些有趣的事情,或问问英国的.你写的语法基本没错,能看懂啦.最后一句可以用I LOOKING FORWARD TO YOUR EARLY REPLY. WRITE TO ME SOON太口语化