这道题怎么做：短文改错.假短文改错.假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文.文章共有10处语言错误,要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词

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这道题怎么做：短文改错. 假

短文改错.
     假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文.文章共有10处语言
错误,要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写上该加的词.
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉.
修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词.
注意：1. 每处错误及修改词均仅限一词； 
          2. 只允许修改10处,多者（从11处起）不记分.

Dear Editor,
     I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food
buying from the market. After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale. Fortunately, one
of their friends found the accident and immediately called on an ambulance, which carried them quickly to
a hospital. After several hours' treatment they finally escaped from death. 
     As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care
about the necessary safety measures or care which happens to consumers. They must be charged with law.
Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together
to make sure food is safe. 
                                                                                                                                         Yours, 
                                                                                                                                        Wang Ming
__________________________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

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buying from the market.After the meal,they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunately,one
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of their friends found the accident and immediately called on an ambulance,which carried them quickly to
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a hospital.After several hours' treatment they finally escaped from death.
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about the necessary safety measures or care which happens to consumers.They must be charged with law.
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Meanwhile,I do hope鈭?hole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together
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to make sure food is safe.
                                                                                                                                           Yours,
                                                                                                                                           Wang Ming