英语短文有什么错误IfyouwanttoaskmewhyweshouldstudyEnglish,myanswerwillbesimpleandclear.Nowletmeenumeratethereasonsonebyoneinthefollowing.Inthefirstplace,Englishhasbecomeaninternationallanguage.Ifyouknow

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英语短文 有什么错误
If you want to ask me why we should study English,my answer will be simple and clear.Now let me enumerate the reasons one by one in the following.
In the first place,English has become an international language.If you know English,you van make a trip round the world without being misunderstood.
In the second place,most valuable books,newspapers and magazines are written in English.If you wish (hope) to get knowledge,you must learn English.

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我想,如果你想用条件从句表达的话,作一些改动会使你的文章更好.如：1、...English has become an international language.用 English has been becoming one of the international languages.2、...you van make a trip...用 you will make a trip ...(条件从句中,主句用将来时.)3、在这句中,If you wish (hope) to get knowledge,you must learn English.如果你想用wish的话,后面要用that从句（表达愿望）.you must learn English 改为you will learn English.