假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

    修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The aim of this report is to show the opinions at reading paper books. On the one hand reading paper books do bring us benefits. First it’s much more convenience to read paper books. We can take notes where we want to express our opinions. Second it does less harm to your eyesight. Third it helped us develop the habit of reading.

On the other hand，paper books have some advantages. For example，they are not easily to carry. Besides they cost a lot of paper that is not very friendly to our environment.

In the general paper books cannot be replaced in spite their disadvantages.

Answer 1

The aim of this report is to show the opinions at (on/about)reading paper books. On the one hand reading paper books do(does) bring us benefits. First it’s much more convenience(convenient) to read paper books. We can take notes where we want to express our opinions. Second it does less harm to your(our) eyesight. Third it helped(helps) us develop the habit of reading.

On the other hand paper books have some advantages(disadvantages). For example they are not easily(easy)to carry. Besides they cost a lot of paper that(which) is not very friendly to our environment.

In the (删the)general paper books cannot be replaced in spite(加of) their disadvantages.