短文改错假定英语短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除

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短文改错 假定英语

短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除
或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.

     I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive.From the time I was
about four until I was about six,I destroyed each of my toy.I was happy when the toys worked,
but when things did wrong,I got angry and broke it.For a while parents bought me new toys.But
before long they began to see which was happening.When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train,
my father said,"That's it.No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year.Meanwhile,I found
out that with more patience I must make my toys to last My attitude changed from then on.
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Answer 1

I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive.From
                                                                               1.  Less
the time I was about four until I was about six,I destroyed each of my toy .I
                                                                                                        2.toys
was happy when the toys worked,but when things did / ^ wrong,t got angry and
                                                                       3.went/go
broke it .For a while ^ parents bought me new toys.But before long they began
       4.them           5. my
to see which was happening.When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train,my
         6.what                                7.  tore
father said,"That's it.No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year.
                                                   8. For
Meanwhile,I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last.
                                                                         9.can                10.去掉
My attitude changed from then on.