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假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏
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假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua,passenger on the flight number BA 793of your company.I take the flight from America on December 3,2015.Unlucky,I found one of my suitcases losing at the airport.Here I am eagerly writing to you to ask for helps.
The suitcase is a black mid-sized one with your name tagged on the handle,that contains many important personal files and some scientific materails.It took me much time and energy to get them but they are valuable in my scientific study.Beside,there are some presents I bought them for my friends and family members.
I'm looking forward to hearing good news from you.
Yours truly,
Li Hua.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua,passenger on the flight number BA 793of your company.I take the flight from America on December 3,2015.Unlucky,I found one of my suitcases losing at the airport.Here I am eagerly writing to you to ask for helps.
The suitcase is a black mid-sized one with your name tagged on the handle,that contains many important personal files and some scientific materails.It took me much time and energy to get them but they are valuable in my scientific study.Beside,there are some presents I bought them for my friends and family members.
I'm looking forward to hearing good news from you.
Yours truly,
Li Hua.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua,∧passenger on the flight number BA 793 of your company.
a
I take the flight from America on December 3,2015.Unlucky,I found
took Unluckily
one of my suitcases losing at the airport.Here I am eagerly writing to
lost
you to ask for helps.
help
The suitcase is a black mid-sized one with your name tagged on the handle,
my
that contains many important personal files and some scientific materails.
which
It took me much time and energy to get them but they are valuable in my
and
scientific study.Beside,there are some presents I bought them for my f
Besides 去掉them
riends and family members.
I'm looking forward to hearing good news from you.
1.passenger 前面加a;考查冠词,passenger是可数名词,所以这里前面要加不定冠词 a 表示泛指.
2.take改为took;考查动词的时态,动作发生在 on December 3,2015,指过去,所以要用一般过去时.
3.Unlucky改为Unluckily;考查副词,此处用在句中作状语,故用副词形式 Unluckily.
4.losing改为lost;考查分词作形容词,现在分词作形容词表示主动,过去分词作形容词表示被动,这里my suitcases 和动词lose是主动关系,所以用过去分词作形容词,在句中作宾语补足语.
5.helps改为help;考查名词,help在这里用在介词for后面,是不可数名词,没有复数形式,故此处用help.
6.your改为my;考查物主代词,结合上下文分析,句意应为"行李箱是一个中号的黑色箱子,把手上贴着我的名字",所以此处应把your改为my.
7.that改为which 考查关系代词,分析句子结构可知这是一个非限制性定语从句,先行词为The suitcase,所以关系代词应该用which.
8.but改为and;考查连词,分析句子结构关系,句意应为"花费了我很多时间和精力才得到它们,并且他们在我的科学研究中很有价值",所以此处应用and表示并列关系.
9.Beside改为Besides;考查形近单词辨析,beside意为"在…旁边",besides意为"除…之外",分析句意应为"箱子里除了很多重要文件和科学资料之外,还有他给朋友买的礼物",故此处应该用besides.
10.去掉them;考查代词,分析句子结构,可知I bought for my friends and family members是一个宾语从句,前面的some presents 是动词bought的宾语,从句中再出现them作宾语就重复了,故去掉them.
I'm Li Hua,∧passenger on the flight number BA 793 of your company.
a
I take the flight from America on December 3,2015.Unlucky,I found
took Unluckily
one of my suitcases losing at the airport.Here I am eagerly writing to
lost
you to ask for helps.
help
The suitcase is a black mid-sized one with your name tagged on the handle,
my
that contains many important personal files and some scientific materails.
which
It took me much time and energy to get them but they are valuable in my
and
scientific study.Beside,there are some presents I bought them for my f
Besides 去掉them
riends and family members.
I'm looking forward to hearing good news from you.
1.passenger 前面加a;考查冠词,passenger是可数名词,所以这里前面要加不定冠词 a 表示泛指.
2.take改为took;考查动词的时态,动作发生在 on December 3,2015,指过去,所以要用一般过去时.
3.Unlucky改为Unluckily;考查副词,此处用在句中作状语,故用副词形式 Unluckily.
4.losing改为lost;考查分词作形容词,现在分词作形容词表示主动,过去分词作形容词表示被动,这里my suitcases 和动词lose是主动关系,所以用过去分词作形容词,在句中作宾语补足语.
5.helps改为help;考查名词,help在这里用在介词for后面,是不可数名词,没有复数形式,故此处用help.
6.your改为my;考查物主代词,结合上下文分析,句意应为"行李箱是一个中号的黑色箱子,把手上贴着我的名字",所以此处应把your改为my.
7.that改为which 考查关系代词,分析句子结构可知这是一个非限制性定语从句,先行词为The suitcase,所以关系代词应该用which.
8.but改为and;考查连词,分析句子结构关系,句意应为"花费了我很多时间和精力才得到它们,并且他们在我的科学研究中很有价值",所以此处应用and表示并列关系.
9.Beside改为Besides;考查形近单词辨析,beside意为"在…旁边",besides意为"除…之外",分析句意应为"箱子里除了很多重要文件和科学资料之外,还有他给朋友买的礼物",故此处应该用besides.
10.去掉them;考查代词,分析句子结构,可知I bought for my friends and family members是一个宾语从句,前面的some presents 是动词bought的宾语,从句中再出现them作宾语就重复了,故去掉them.
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