英语短文改错、有十个错、会加分的啦、你要多少分都行、呃、我给得起求大神帮助英语短文改错、有十个错、会加分的啦DearSirorMadman,I'mwitingtoapplyforthejobyoupostonlineonMay17th.I'mLiH

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英语短文改错、有十个错、会加分的啦、你要多少分都行、呃、我给得起求大神帮助
英语短文改错、有十个错、会加分的啦 Dear Sir or Madman,I'm witing to apply for the job you post online on May 17th.I'm Li Hua from China,now I'm stuying in a high school near by Green Street.I have been look for a part-time job to make some money and keep myself busliy after school.I think I'm the very person which suits the job.Firstly,I have much experinences in helping move the furniture and doing repairs.Secondly,I'm good for the computer.Thirdly,I'm a good driver so well.I'm looking to receiving you early reply.Yours,Li Hua

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Dear Sir or Madmam ,I'm writing to apply for the job you post online on May 17th.I'm Li Hua from China,now I'm studying in a high school near Green Street.I have been l ooking for a part-time job to make some money and keep myself busy after school.I think I'm the very person who suits the job.Firstly,I have much experinence in helping move the furniture and doing repairs.Secondly,I'm good at the computer.Thirdly,I'm a good driver as well.I'm looking forward to receiving your early reply.Yours,Li Hua