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The above chart shows that the Australian Dollar strengthening against the United States Dollar during the month of October 2010. It can be clearly however that which there is a definite trend over the entire month there is considerable movement day to day. Some of this movement demonstrates a strong shift in the opposite direction to the trend (eg.19 October). It can be difficult to form an opinion on the longer term trend by looking at date related to a short period.

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这些句子有语法和表达的问题,不妨考虑下面比较简洁和专业的表达：
The chart above shows the Australian dollar strengthening against the U.S.dollar during the month of October,2010.While the trend for the month is clear,there are considerable daily counter-trend fluctuations,such as October 19.It is therefore difficult to form an opinion on the trend by looking only at the short-term data.