我的英文日记,高手帮我改改语病.ifeelalittletirednow.butthereasonisn'tthework.ididn'tdonemanyworktoday.youwannaknowwhyifeltthatway.well,ifyoumustknow.i'lltellyouthewholereason.becausethetimeis23:41now.i,

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我的英文日记,高手帮我改改语病.
i feel a little tired now.but the reason isn't the work.i didn't done many work today.you wanna know why i felt that way.well,if you must know.i'll tell you the whole reason.because the time is 23:41 now.i,ve been hypnotize a few time back.for that reason,i inclined to fast over this diary.i used to show something or somebody easily.i didn't liked more masquerade.so writing hours are now over.everybody beybey..i honer to let someone find my mistake in this diary.thank you very much.

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i feel a little tired now.but the reason isn't the work.i didn't [do] [a lot] work today.you [want to] know why i [feel] [this] way[?] well,if you must know.i'll tell you the whole reason.the time is [now] 23:41.i,ve been hypnotize a [moment ago].for that reason,i [incline] to [rush through] this diary.i used to show something [to] somebody easily.i didn't liked [to disguise].so writing hours are now over.everybody [bye bye]..i [am going] to let someone find my [mistakes] in this diary.thank you very much.