初三英语作文求看下有没有错Animalsaregoodfriendsofhumanbeings.Therefore,peopleshouldbeallowedtohavepetdogs.Therearealotofreasonsforthis.First,dogscanbegoodlisteners.Mostofusdon'thavebrothersorsisters.Inthi

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初三英语作文求看下有没有错
Animals are good friends of human beings.Therefore,people should be allowed to have pet dogs.There are a lot of reasons for this. First,dogs can be good listeners.Most of us don't have brothers or sisters.In this case,we will always feel lonely.At this time,we can talk with our pet dogs.Although they can't speak,they can understand our feelings.Second,dogs can do a lot of work for man.They play with us and keep door for us.They even can be taught to be the "eyes"for a blind person or "ears"for a deaf person.Finally,learning to care for a pet dog helps us grow up and learn how to respect all living things.We can also learn about life and death and become more responsible people by keeping a pet dog.All in all,I believe keeping pet dogs is a good choice for us.

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　　Animals are good friends of human beings.
　　Therefore,people should be allowed to 【have pet dogs】.【keep pets such as dogs】
　　There are a lot of reasons 【for this】.【to support this】
　　First,【dogs】 can be good listeners.【pets】
　　Most of us don't have brothers or sisters.
　　In this case,we【 will always】 feel lonely.【would feel lonely sometimes】
　　【At this time】,we 【can】 talk with our 【pet dogs】.【When we do feel so】【will be better to】【pets】
　　Although they can't speak,they can 【】 understand our feelings.【still】
　　Second,【】dogs can do a lot of work for man.【smart】
　　They 【】 play with us and keep door for us.【may】
　　They even can be 【taught】 to be the "eyes"for a blind person or "ears"for a deaf person.
　　【trained】
　　【Finally】,learning to【】 care 【for】 a pet dog 【helps】 us 【grow up】 and 【learn how to】 respect all living things.
　　【Last but not least】【take】【of】【will help】【to be responsible】【know the importance to】
　　We can also learn about life and death and become 【more responsible people】 by keeping a pet dog.【more caring people】
　　All in all,I believe【】 keeping pet dogs is a 【quite】good choice for us.【that】
改完的：
　　Animals are good friends of human beings.Therefore,people should be allowed to keep pets such as dogs.There are a lot of reasons to support this.
　　First,the pets,especialliy dogs can be good listeners.Today,most of us don't have brothers or sisters.In this case,we would feel lonely sometimes.When we do feel so,we will be better to talk with our pets.Although they can't speak,they can still understand our feelings.
　　Second,smart dogs can do a lot of work for man.They may play with us and keep the door for us.They even can be trained to be the "eyes"for a blind person or "ears"for a deaf person.
　　Last but not least,learning to take care of a pet dog will help us to be responsible and know the importance to respect all living things.
　　We can also learn about life and death and become more caring people by keeping a pet dog.
　　All in all,I believe that keeping pet dogs is a quite good choice for us.
总体来说写的不错,把很多语义重复或用词不当的地方改了.
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