英语翻译由于每日破损零件的数量大大的超过了发往A区的数量,Q区经常会出现爆仓的现象,破损件的周转率比较低,导致溢出的破损件会占用仓库其它的空间.我自己译了一下有什么需要改的！

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英语翻译
由于每日破损零件的数量大大的超过了发往A区的数量,Q区经常会出现爆仓的现象,破损件的周转率比较低,导致溢出的破损件会占用仓库其它的空间.
我自己译了一下 有什么需要改的！
Due to the daily quantity of damaged parts a lot more than delivery to A zone,there are no enough space to contain the damaged parts in Q zone,the low turnover rate will makes overflow parts take up other space of warehouse.

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应该这么改：
Every day,due to the quantity of damaged parts is a lot more than that is dispatched to area A,overstocking is a often a problem in area C.The damaged parts are usually slow in circulation resulting a huge accumulation and occupying a lot of storage spaces.