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请大家帮我改一下这两段话修改语法错误就可以了:First:OnceIhadadream.Whenthirdyearinseniorhighschool(perhapsauniversity)Iperformedwellintheschool.Iamamodelstudentinmyclass.WhenIambored,Ialwayslikest
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请大家帮我改一下这两段话
修改语法错误就可以了:First:Once I had a dream.When third year in senior high school(perhaps a university) I performed well in the school.I am a model student in my class.When I am bored,I always likes to make fun with a girl who sits near me,it takes me a particularly comfortable feeling.Then we gradually so familiar.I taught her subject,patiently guide her step by step to solve.But she actually did not understand.I can only a small sigh,and then the body lying on the table to expressed some disappointment.Then I asked her what steps don't you understand,she told me that this step or that step.I patiently explained to her,until she understand.Later,she gave me a fuzzy bear when the finish class time.I am surprised that she gave me something,so say a joke:"oh,you did it that makes people think we like as the couples."She pretended to angry and said:"Oh,if you don't accept it to return to me again."But I even asked whether it was bought in the stall.She seems very angry when she heard my words.Then I asked her where to buy it and how mach with concern.She said ten yuans.I said it was ten yuans seems a little high,but I should say thanks anyway.In fact,At that time the two sides have been feeling on the other side,but we didn't said clear.
Second:Later the half-term examination is near at hand.I say in cheek if your grade were been better then me,I would stand you KFC,if you were worse then me,you would invite me to eat.She scorned to shake her head."Well,it is not obvious to bully me?Don't try to throw weight around!"she said gently.I smiled at her,so she accepted my request.A little while later,our half-term examination results came through.My result was better than her a lot,but she has some progress.I told her to treat me at noon,she said do it at night,but I didn't accept it.I abide by what I said,or you did it that made people thought we like as the couples.She was feeling weepy,I felt abnormal,so not to say another word.
如果能结合语境改就更好了……
修改语法错误就可以了:First:Once I had a dream.When third year in senior high school(perhaps a university) I performed well in the school.I am a model student in my class.When I am bored,I always likes to make fun with a girl who sits near me,it takes me a particularly comfortable feeling.Then we gradually so familiar.I taught her subject,patiently guide her step by step to solve.But she actually did not understand.I can only a small sigh,and then the body lying on the table to expressed some disappointment.Then I asked her what steps don't you understand,she told me that this step or that step.I patiently explained to her,until she understand.Later,she gave me a fuzzy bear when the finish class time.I am surprised that she gave me something,so say a joke:"oh,you did it that makes people think we like as the couples."She pretended to angry and said:"Oh,if you don't accept it to return to me again."But I even asked whether it was bought in the stall.She seems very angry when she heard my words.Then I asked her where to buy it and how mach with concern.She said ten yuans.I said it was ten yuans seems a little high,but I should say thanks anyway.In fact,At that time the two sides have been feeling on the other side,but we didn't said clear.
Second:Later the half-term examination is near at hand.I say in cheek if your grade were been better then me,I would stand you KFC,if you were worse then me,you would invite me to eat.She scorned to shake her head."Well,it is not obvious to bully me?Don't try to throw weight around!"she said gently.I smiled at her,so she accepted my request.A little while later,our half-term examination results came through.My result was better than her a lot,but she has some progress.I told her to treat me at noon,she said do it at night,but I didn't accept it.I abide by what I said,or you did it that made people thought we like as the couples.She was feeling weepy,I felt abnormal,so not to say another word.
如果能结合语境改就更好了……
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First:Once upon a time,I had a dream.When third year in senior high school(perhaps a university),I performed well in the school.I am a model student in my class.When I am bored,I always liked to make fun with a girl who sits nears me.It takes me a particularly comfortable feeling.Then we gradually so familiar.I teached her subject,patiently guide her step by step to solve.But she actually did not understand.I just feel a small sighed.And then my body lying on the table to expressed some disappointment.Then I asked her what steps don't you understood.she told me that this step or that step she couldn't understand.I patiently explained to her until she understand.Afterwards,she gave me a fuzzy bear when class over.I am surprised that she gave me something present.So I said a joke:"Oh,you did it that makes people think we are like as the couples."She pretended to angry and said:"Oh,if you don't accept it to returned me again,OK?"But I even asked whether it was bought in the stall.She seems very angry because of heard my words.Then I asked her where to buy it and how much with the concern.She says ten yuans.I said ten yuans,it was seems a little high,but I should says thanks anyway.In fact,at that time we two have both feeling on the other side,but we didn't said clear to.
Second:Later the half-term examination is near at hand,I said I would cheer if your grade were been even better then me,I would stand you to KFC,if you were worse than me you would invite me to ate.She reluctantly shook his head."Well,it is not obvious to bully me.Don't try to throw weight around!"She said gently.I smiled at her,so she accepted my request.A little while later,our half-term examination results came through.My result was better than her a lot,but she has some progress.
I told her to treat me at noon,she said:the evening.But I didn't accept it.I abide by what I said,or you did it that made people thought we like as the couples.She was feeling weepied,I felt abnormal.Therefore,the other I did not say.
Second:Later the half-term examination is near at hand,I said I would cheer if your grade were been even better then me,I would stand you to KFC,if you were worse than me you would invite me to ate.She reluctantly shook his head."Well,it is not obvious to bully me.Don't try to throw weight around!"She said gently.I smiled at her,so she accepted my request.A little while later,our half-term examination results came through.My result was better than her a lot,but she has some progress.
I told her to treat me at noon,she said:the evening.But I didn't accept it.I abide by what I said,or you did it that made people thought we like as the couples.She was feeling weepied,I felt abnormal.Therefore,the other I did not say.
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