请英语高手告诉我以下邮件有什么问题没有,谢谢!Dear:Plscanyoubesokindlyandgivemeafeedbackaboutrejectedrawmaterial.Judgebyourpurchaser'swordsthatthedeliverdateofAPSCisoutofscheduling,our

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请英语高手告诉我以下邮件有什么问题没有,谢谢!
Dear : Pls can you be so kindly and give me a feedback about rejected raw material . Judge by our purchaser's words that the deliver date of APSC is out of scheduling,our production line is going to discontinued on Nov 29 2012 ,but there are 17000pcs components in our return stock,in the other words ,can we use those compoents after sorting?pls kindly advise ,thank you!

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语法紊乱,中国人可以看懂.

Dea Sir,
It would be appreciated if you can send us a feedback on the rejected raw material.劳驾您给我们发一份被拒原材料的反馈信息,非常感谢.
接下来一句无法理解.
然后是：
Our production line is going to shutdown on Nov. 29th, 2012.
We have 17000pcs components in stock.接下来一句什么意思?
Please kindly advise. Thanks.

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