大家看看我的文章这是一片描写神舟7号的英语文章,我害怕有语法错误,Sem.,25,2008,Shenzhou7mannedspaceshiplaunched.thespaceshipflew46(圈)intheorbit.Shenzhou7spaceship(释放)satelliteverysuccess.Thetaikonau

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大家看看我的文章
这是一片描写神舟7号的英语文章,我害怕有语法错误,
Sem.,25,2008 ,Shenzhou 7 manned spaceship launched .the spaceship flew 46(圈) in the orbit.Shenzhou 7 spaceship (释放) satellite very success.The taikonaut are zhai zhigang ,liu boming and jing haipeng .sem.27,the taikonaut zhai zhigang do the space walk.
Sem.28,shenzhou7 manned spaceship landed in the nei meng gu .At 4：50 ,when the shenzhou 7 spaceship flew on the south (大西洋) ocean ,the space flight (发出) ruturn command.The re-entry module and propelling module (分离),the engine (点火) ,spaceship return to the earth.
改后：
On September 25 ,2008,the shenzhou 7 manned spaceship has been launched.The spaceship have flown 46 circles .The Shenzhou 7 manned spaceship has released the artificial satellite successfully.the astronaut of shenzhou 7 manned spaceship is Zhai Zhi Gang ,Liu Bo Ming ,jing haipeng .On September 27,astronaut Zhai Zhi Gang did space walk.On September 28,shenzhou 7 manned spaceship land in Inner Mongolia.in 4：50,when shenzhou 7 manned spaceship flew on south Atlantic Ocean,spaceship was sent out return instruction by the person.the engine lights the fire,and the spaceship came back to the earth.Shenzhou 7 manned spaceship launch successful.

Answer 1

sem---sep
7----No.7
launched----was launched
圈----circles
大西洋-----Atlantic ocean
return---returned