短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉

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短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

As a student Li Hua works very harder at his lessons so he is always one of the top student in our class. He loves sports very much that he makes it a rule to play the football at weekends with his friends. Li Hua is concerning about the students who are not good at their lessons so she always helps them after class.

As a monitor Li Hua has organized some voluntary activities successful. We visit a nursing home last month and we pick rubbish in the park near our school every week. What we do is warmly welcomed by the community. This is how Li Hua is so popular.

Answer 1

1.harder →hard2.student →students3.very→ so4.去掉the5.concerning →concerned6.she→ he7.successful→ successfully8.visit → visited9.加up10.how →why

分 析：
李华是我们的班长，他学习十分刻苦。他也很热爱体育，每周末都和朋友们踢足球。他还组织了志愿者活动，都很成功。李华在班上很受欢迎。1.harder →hard 考查比较级。后句没有拿李华和别人比较，用原型hard。2.student →students 考查名词。 one of 句型中，后接可数名词，要用复数，用students。3.very→ so 考查固定搭配。So...that 句型表示太..以至于，用so。4.去掉the 考查冠词。Play football 不加冠词，play后接球类都不加冠词，去掉the。5.concerning →concerned 考查固定搭配，be concerned about ，关心，用concerned。6.she→ he 考查代词。 明显，李华是男生，用he。7.successful→ successfully 考查副词。修饰动词organized，用副词successfully。8.visit → visited 考查时态。与前文时态保持一致，前文organized用的过去时，用过去时visited。9.加up 考查固定搭配。Pick up 捡起，加up。10.