英语检查一句话,Nowadays,Someparentssaythatchildren’sfreetimeactivitiesshouldbeeducationalotherssayweshouldnotgivethechildrentoomuchpressure.AsIseeitthatIpartlyagreewiththeopinionsexpressedabove.请问标点

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英语检查一句话,
Nowadays,Some parents say that children’s free time activities should be educational others say we should not give the children too much pressure .As I see it that I partly agree with the opinions expressed above .
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恕我直言,很中式英语,也有很多语法问题
Nowadays some parents hold that children should not have their spare time except studying while others insist we should not exert too much pressure upon the children.说不是一定都得用say的,hold 持有观点,insist 坚持,while 然而,连词连接两个句子成为一个并列句,给太多压力 施加用exert upon较好
第2句话你部分同意谁的观点?而且也不是这样表达的,是不是说都有一定道理,但都不完全对?As far as I'm concerned,在我看来,these views are not completely valid and I can only agree partially.