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帮我看一下我的文章有没有错误I'mwritingtoinformyouthatweareintroducingthecarparkingcardforthestaffwhodrivestowork.Becauseoftheupdatedparkingsystem,youcannotentrytheparklotwithoutparkingcardanymore.Please

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I'm writing to inform you that we are introducing the car parking card for the staff who drives to work.Because of the updated parking system,you cannot entry the park lot without parking card anymore.Please get your card at administrative office.
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drives改为drive,因为staff可以表示职工这个团体.entry改为enter,因为entry是名词,这里要用动词.anymore要分开.administrative前最好加个the.