英语作文改错,有十出Itseemsthattherearealargernumberofbeggarinthestreetsthanthereusedtobe.Idon'tknowhowweshouldhelpthemornot.OnceIgavesomemoneytoabeggarwholookspoor.However,minuteslate,Isawhimboughsome

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英语作文改错,有十出
It seems that there are a larger number of beggar in the streets than there used to be.I don't know how we should help them or not.Once I gave some money to a beggar who looks poor.However,minutes late,I saw him bough some cigarettes.It really shocked at me.In my opinion,anyone who work hard can make a living.I'm afraid that giving them money isn't best way to help them.maybe the government can do something to helping them.Anyway,if they want to live a better life,should learn to depend on ourselves.

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It seems that there are a larger number of beggar（beggars） in the streets than there used to be.I don't know how（wether）we should help them or not.Once I gave some money to a beggar who looks poor.However,minutes late（later）,I saw him bough（bought） some cigarettes.It really shocked （去掉at） me.In my opinion,anyone who work（works） hard can make （去掉a ）living.I'm afraid that giving them money isn't （加the） best way to help them.maybe the government can do something to helping them.Anyway,if they want to live a better life,（they）should learn to depend on ourselves（themselves）.