英语作文改错有十个Itseemsthattherearealargernumberofbeggarinthestreetsthanthereusedtobe.Idon'tknowhowweshouldhelpthemornot.OnceIgavesomemoneytoabeggarwholookspoor.However,minuteslate,Isawhimboughsome

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英语作文改错有十个
It seems that there are a larger number of beggar in the streets than there used to be.I don't know how we should help them or not.Once I gave some money to a beggar who looks poor.However,minutes late,I saw him bough some cigarettes.It really shocked at me.In my opinion,anyone who work hard can make a living.I'm afraid that giving them money isn't best way to help them.maybe the government can do something to helping them.Anyway,if they want to live a better life,should learn to depend on ourselves.

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are 改为 is （第一行）
beggar 改为 beggars （第一行）
how 改为 whether （第一行末尾）
looks 改为 looked （第二行）
bough 改为 buying （第三行）
at 去掉 (第三行）
work 改为 works （第三行）
best 前加 the      (第四行）
helping  改为 help （第五行）
ourselves 改为 themselve （最后一行）