英语改错We,therefore,canmakeclearfromtheabovediscussionthathappinesslivesaroundusandourlifesarefullofhappiness.这句话里面有多少处错误,请指出,并说明是什么错误~

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英语改错
We,therefore,can make clear from the above discussion that happiness lives around us and our lifes are full of happiness.
这句话里面有多少处错误,请指出,并说明是什么错误~

Answer 1

1.make和clear中间加入it,来做形式宾语,真正的宾语是后面的that从句.
2.our lifes变成our lives
life的复数形式是lives
3.至于楼上说的"above discussion 改为 discussion above"其实没有必要,因为above修饰名词时,放在名词前面或名词后面都是可以的.