假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

Wise and warm-hearted Mr. Smith taught me the history when I was in Grade 7. I shall never forget how he told me personally one day. He said “Always aim high than you believe you can reach. If not you’ 11 discover that when your talents be set free by your imagination you can achieve any goal. If people offer their helps or wisdom as you go through life accepting it gratefully. You can learn many from those who have gone before you. However don't be afraid step off the accepted path and head off in your own direction unless your heart tells you that it’s the right way for you."

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1. . .. taught me the history ... 去掉 the

2. . .. how he told me ... how → what

3. . .. aim high than ... high → higher

4. If not you* 11. .. not → so

5. . .. be set free by ... be → are

6. . .. offer their helps ... helps → help

7. . .. accepting it gratefiilly. accepting → accept

8. . .. can learn many ... many → much

9. . .. be afraid step ... afraid 后加 to

10. . .. unless your heart unless → if