英语改错题IamaSenior3studentwhotaketheCollegeEntranceExamsoon.Nowihaveaprobleminchoosingmymajor.Myparentswantmetostudyinternationalbusiness.Therefore,myheadteachersuggeststhatichosesoftwareengineering.likeforme

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I am a Senior 3 student who take the College Entrance Exam soon.
Now i have a problem in choosing my major.My parents want me to
study international business.Therefore,my head teacher suggests that
i chose software engineering.like for me,i have a tatally different idea with
them.i want to take environment science as my major so that i can use that
i learnto help improve the environment in my hometown after the graduation.
But can i possible make a decision on my own against the will of my parents and
my teache?I am written to you for your opinion.would you please spare some time
to give me some advices?

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I am a Senior 3 student who （will） take the College Entrance Exam soon.
Now i have a problem in choosing my major.My parents want me to
study international business.Therefore-->However,my head teacher suggests that
i chose-->choose software engineering.like for me,i have a tatally different idea with
them.i want to take environment science as my major so that i can use that-->what
i learnto help improve-->improving the environment in my hometown after the graduation.
But can i possible-->possibly make a decision on my own against the will of my parents and
my teache?I am written-->writing to you for your opinion.would you please spare some time
to give me some advices-->advice?