我的英语作文大家看下按高考评分标准能达到几分浙江的谢谢SeniorHighSchoolStudents'OutsideReadingItisshowninthechartthatnoneofthemspendmuchtimereading,asthehoursspentbythestudentsofsenior1perwee

Question

我的英语作文 大家看下按高考评分标准能达到几分 浙江的 谢谢
Senior High School Students' Outside Reading
It is shown in the chart that none of them spend much time reading, as the hours spent by the students of senior 1 per week on average reach only 7，while the senior 2 spend even 3 hours fewer, as for the senior 3 students, the time is so little that just 2.
Reasons for this case are various. Firstly, it is their heavy load on study that to blame. With more and more assignment to be finished, students have less and less spare time for reading as their grades rise.Besides, their ignoring the importance of reading also contributes to it!
As far as I’m concerned, to better this situation, the school should lighten students’ burden, meanwhile, students themselves should attach great attention to reading to make it a part of life, which equals to study.

Answer 1

字数144字，稍微多了一点。语法什么的都不错。描述表格的内容很干练。最后的分析原因及建议也写得不错。是一篇不错的作文。
在浙江也就22——24分左右吧（满分是30分）。想突破25分还是蛮困难的。浙江高考英语作文上25分的还是比较少的。上20分就是不错的作文了。