初心者=>请帮忙挑语法\词汇错误Lvwasinmyseniorschoolclassmate.Hewasfatandtall,sohehadtowearlargestsizeofclothes.Hewasanabsolutelyhelper,hehadbeenhelpedmanyclassmate,includingstudyandgame.Everyonelikedhim.Be

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初心者=>请帮忙挑语法\词汇错误
Lv was in my senior school classmate.He was fat and tall,so he had to wear largest size of clothes.He was an absolutely helper,he had been helped many classmate,including study and game.Every one liked him.
Because he was fat,some people had prejudice to him,it made him couldn’t take part in lots of group activity.But he never gave up,he tried him best to catch any chance,he had a strong in body and spirit to show him ability.
As I remember it.It was having school match,and the program was tug-of-war,our class join it.From the start,some of us thought he was too fat to use all his strength,so he couldn’t on the match.Of cause,we lost the round,Lv still ask to join.We agree with him,next round,we were fighting,lv began shouted:”one,two!”,“pull!” we received.we certain moments resonate.We trust him and won the round.In the end,we won the champion.
Whatever what happen,you mustn’t give up,and do your best.that’s what I learned from him.Now he had gone to france,I hope he will keep him belief whole life,that’s also I need do.

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第一段：Lv was （in 去掉）my senior school classmate
He was an absolute（ly 去掉）helper,he had （been去掉） helped many classmate,including（加in） study and game.
第二段：Because he was fat,some people had prejudice （to改成against） him.
第三段：So he was unable to take part in lots of group activity.（这句整句都改了） But he never gave up,he tried( him改成his ) best to (catch改成take) any chance,he (had a 改成was )strong in body and spirit to show (him 改成his)ability.
As I remember( it去掉).(It was 改成we were)having school match,and the program was tug-of-war,our class join it.From the start,some of us thought he was too fat to use all his strength,so he couldn’t (+be)on the match.Of cause,we lost the round,Lv still ask to join.We agree with him,next round,we were fighting,lv began (+to)shout（ed去掉):”one,two!”,“pull!” we received.we
certain(+ly) (moments?) resonate(d).We trust(ed) him and won the round.In the end,we won the champion.
Whatever (-what) happen(+s),you mustn’t give up,and do your best.that’s what I learned from him.Now he had gone to （f大写）rance,I hope he will keep him belief whole life,that’s also (+what)I need do.