英语文章改错(请有一定水平的高手)Sheleftshewasfree,IaslocandothethingIreallywanttoinvestmywholeenergyinto.Sheisthelighthouseontheroadinmyseniorhigh.Sheletmechoosetherightwayatanytime.Sheiskind,smar

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英语文章改错(请有一定水平的高手)
She left
she was free,I aslo can do the thing I really want to invest my whole energy into.
She is the lighthouse on the road in my senior high.
She let me choose the right way at any time.
She is kind,smart,beautiful,she haven’t any shortcoming.She is perfect.
She .
She ....
She left ,taking my heart,I lost the vitality.
My dream became more farther,following her left,to the place I won't see her again.
I was very sad ,Looking at the sky ,your chirrupy smilies disappearing in the boundless sky.

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She left.
She was free.I aslo can do the thing I really want to invest my whole energy into.
She is the lighthouse on the road where my senior high is.
She let me choose the right way at any time.
She is kind,smart,beautiful,she hasn’t any shortcoming.She is perfect.
She is my dreamboat.
She took my breath away.
She left ,taking my heart.I lost the vitality.
My dream became more farther,with her leaving,to the place where I won't see her again.
I was very sad ,Looking at the sky with your chirrupy smile disappearing in the boundless sky.