看下这封信有没有语法错误给一个老外写的,帮忙看看先```谢谢了Dearfriend:CanicallyouRico?Maybeit'syourname.I;mthechinesewhohadtalkwithyouinOmegle,I'msorryichangetheemailagainandagain,itisbecauseiwas

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看下这封信有没有语法错误
给一个老外写的,帮忙看看先```谢谢了
Dear friend:
Can i call you Rico?Maybe it's your name.I;m the chinese who had talk with you in Omegle,I'm sorry i change the email again and again,it is because i was worry about that can you got my email if i use others email.In final,ichose the 163.com.
Now I want to go on our topic--the Tibet topic.But i don't know what's your goverment told you .so,place replay this letter and told me what do you know about Tibet,i want to know what was your goverment told you,thank you!
Postscript:My english is not very good,if i had any wrong with grammer,place tell me.I want to improve my english by this way.

Answer 1

首先请将你信中的 i 都改为 I.
句首的can改为could比较委婉.
english 应为 English .
Maybe it's your name.这句话相当不礼貌,改为 I suppose it's your name.
I;m 标点是错的
E-mail address 意思更清晰
……I was worried about thar you could not get my email……
the Tibet topic 改为 on Tibet 意思是关于西藏
In final,这是错的,应为 Finally
government told the public.应是告诉公众,而不是你这位朋友,难道他是政府官员?
very well,if I had something wrong with grammar.
最后一句最好换成 Best wishes.应为外国人是很讨厌你利用他是为了提高你的英语水平,这是很不尊重很不礼貌的行为.
希望你的英文会有很大进步!